Vengence (very violant, very angry, don't read unless you like evil things happening to annoying people)

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by IfThereBeThorns (Newborn Zoner) on Sunday, 16-Oct-2005 17:32:27

In the light of a waining moon you stand silent, staring out your second story window. Your mind is lost, so far gone in a world of your own creation. Dark eyes narrow as they catch sight of your motionless figure and the shadow nears you. But you don't notice, you don't feel it untill it's standing right behind you.
Suddenly, you turn and see the face before you. Your lips part in a silent scream as I smile at you contemptuously.
As dawn's light with aurora flaming comes to light the sceen long vacated, no one is there to see the remains of one who should have never walked this Earth. A ruby pool, a broken body, a mortal who's lost the game. A shadow watches from somewhere close, laughing at her victory.

Post 2 by bermuda-triangulese (Help me, I'm stuck to my chair!) on Monday, 17-Oct-2005 8:31:26

well done! Lol I like the way you wrote that. Very well expressed. Dark things are good, I like them loads.

Post 3 by HauntedReverie (doing the bad mango) on Monday, 17-Oct-2005 18:38:50

and to think, that er, poem came to me, all because this moron crashed my JAWS :) well thanks, I like good things said about my work, thanks!!!

Post 4 by jessmonsilva (Taking over the boards, one topic at a time.) on Monday, 17-Oct-2005 21:01:41

Good job on this piece as well, we have some very creative users on the zone indeed.

Post 5 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Tuesday, 18-Oct-2005 9:44:44

Stunning and I'm all for evil pestering the annoying